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Lakshmana at the gate

द्वार पर लक्ष्मण
Valmiki · Kishkindha Kanda
4.31.1–4.36.20 (CrEd 4.30.1–4.35.20)

सुग्रीव ने तय समय बीत जाने दिया है, इससे क्रुद्ध लक्ष्मण उसे मारने निकलते हैं, और राम उन्हें नरमी से बात करने को कहते हैं। किष्किन्धा के द्वार पर उनका क्रोध देखकर वानर भाग खड़े होते हैं; हनुमान घबराए सुग्रीव से कहते हैं कि हाथ जोड़कर लक्ष्मण को प्रसन्न करें, और भीतर तारा लक्ष्मण के कठोर वचनों का उत्तर देकर उन्हें शांत करती है। सुग्रीव अपना भय और अपना मद उतार फेंकते हैं, राम के पीछे चलने का वचन देते हैं और क्षमा माँगते हैं, और लक्ष्मण भी बदले में उनसे क्षमा माँगते हैं।

Lakshmana, angry that Sugriva has let the appointed time slip by, sets out to kill him, and Rama bids him speak gently. His fury at the gate of Kishkindha scatters the monkeys; Hanuman tells the alarmed Sugriva to join his palms and win Lakshmana's grace, and in the inner rooms Tara answers Lakshmana's harsh words and calms him. Sugriva casts off his fear and his drunkenness, promises to march behind Rama, and asks forgiveness, and Lakshmana asks his in turn.

Sanskrit · Hindi · English·Translation: Raam Leela

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Part 1 · भाग 1

At the gate

Valmiki 4.31.1–51 (CrEd 4.30.1–43)

॥ 4.31.1 ॥

CrEd 4.30.1

silent moment मौन क्षण

॥ 4.31.2–3ab ॥

CrEd 4.30.2–3ab

condensed from 4.31.2–3ab

लक्ष्मणLakshmana

वाल्मीकि

न वानरः स्थास्यति साधुवृत्ते … मतिक्षयाद् ग्राम्यसुखेषु सक्तस् तव प्रसादाप्रतिकारबुद्धिः ॥

na vānaraḥ sthāsyati sādhuvṛtte … matikṣayād grāmyasukheṣu saktas tava prasādāpratikārabuddhiḥ

Translation

The monkey will not hold to the good man’s way …
his wits decayed, clinging to common pleasures,
he gives no thought to repaying your grace.

लीला

यह वानर भले रास्ते पर नहीं टिकेगा। अक़्ल खोकर भोगों में डूबा है; आपकी कृपा का बदला चुकाने की उसे सोच तक नहीं।

Subtitle

This monkey won't keep to the good way.
Witless, sunk in common pleasures,
he never thinks
of repaying your grace.

॥ 4.31.3c, 4ab ॥

CrEd 4.30.3c, 4ab

condensed from 4.31.3c, 4ab

लक्ष्मणLakshmana

वाल्मीकि

हतोऽग्रजं पश्यतु वालिनं सः … न धारये कोपम् उदीर्णवेगं निहन्मि सुग्रीवम् असत्यम् अद्य ॥

hato 'grajaṃ paśyatu vālinaṃ saḥ … na dhāraye kopam udīrṇavegaṃ nihanmi sugrīvam asatyam adya

Translation

Slain, let him see his elder, Vali …
I cannot hold this anger, its force unleashed;
I slay the faithless Sugriva today.

लीला

मरकर वह अपने बड़े भाई वाली से जा मिले। यह उफनता गुस्सा अब मुझसे नहीं थमता। आज मैं उस झूठे सुग्रीव को मार डालूँगा।

Subtitle

Let him die, and meet his brother Vali.
I cannot hold this anger:
today I kill
the lying Sugriva.

॥ 4.31.4cd ॥

CrEd 4.30.4cd

लक्ष्मणLakshmana

वाल्मीकि

हरिप्रवीरैः सह वालिपुत्रो नरेन्द्रपत्न्या विचयं करोतु ॥

haripravīraiḥ saha vāliputro narendrapatnyā vicayaṃ karotu

Translation

With the foremost of the monkey heroes
let Vali’s son seek the wife of the lord of men.

लीला

रानी की खोज वाली का बेटा करे, वानर वीरों को साथ लेकर।

Subtitle

Let Vali's son
and the monkey heroes
search for the queen.

॥ 4.31.5 ॥

CrEd 4.30.5

silent moment मौन क्षण

॥ 4.31.6 ॥

CrEd 4.30.6

रामRama

वाल्मीकि

न हि वै त्वद्विधो लोके पापम् एवं समाचरेत् पापम् आर्येण यो हन्ति स वीरः पुरुषोत्तमः ॥

na hi vai tvadvidho loke pāpam evaṃ samācaret pāpam āryeṇa yo hanti sa vīraḥ puruṣottamaḥ

Translation

No one like you in all the world
would ever do so wrong a deed.
Who slays a wrong with nobleness,
he is the hero, best of men.

लीला

तुम्हारे जैसा कोई ऐसा पाप नहीं करता। जो बुराई को भलमनसाहत से मारे, वही वीर है, वही पुरुषों में उत्तम।

Subtitle

No one like you
would do such a wrong.
Who kills a wrong with nobility
is the hero, the best of men.

॥ 4.31.7 ॥

CrEd 4.30.7

रामRama

वाल्मीकि

नेदम् अद्य त्वया ग्राह्यं साधुवृत्तेन लक्ष्मण तां प्रीतिम् अनुवर्तस्व पूर्ववृत्तं च संगतम् ॥

nedam adya tvayā grāhyaṃ sādhuvṛttena lakṣmaṇa tāṃ prītim anuvartasva pūrvavṛttaṃ ca saṃgatam

Translation

Not so should you take this today,
Lakshmana, you whose ways are good;
keep faith with that affection,
and the bond that was made before.

लीला

तुम भले हो, लक्ष्मण। आज इसे ऐसे मत लो। वह प्रीत निभाओ, वह पुरानी मित्रता।

Subtitle

You are good, Lakshmana:
don't take it so today.
Keep that love,
the friendship made before.

॥ 4.31.8–9 ॥

CrEd 4.30.8–9

रामRama

वाल्मीकि

सामोपहितया वाचा रूक्षाणि परिवर्जयन् वक्तुम् अर्हसि सुग्रीवं व्यतीतं कालपर्यये ॥

sāmopahitayā vācā rūkṣāṇi parivarjayan vaktum arhasi sugrīvaṃ vyatītaṃ kālaparyaye

Translation

With words that carry conciliation,
all harshness set aside,
you should speak to Sugriva:
the appointed time has passed.

लीला

मीठे बोल बोलना, कड़वे छोड़ देना। सुग्रीव से कहना कि समय बीत चुका है।

Subtitle

With gentle words,
leaving out the harsh,
tell Sugriva
the time has gone by.

॥ 4.31.13–15 ॥

CrEd 4.30.13–15

वाल्मीकिValmikiverse caption

वाल्मीकि

कामक्रोधसमुत्थेन भ्रातुः कोपाग्निना वृतः ।
प्रभञ्जन इवाप्रीतः प्रययौ लक्ष्मणस् तदा ।
सालतालाश्वकर्णांश् च तरसा पातयन् बहून् ।
पर्यस्यन् गिरिकूटानि द्रुमान् अन्यांश् च वेगतः ।
शिलाश् च शकलीकुर्वन् पद्भ्यां गज इवाशुगः ।
दूरम् एकपदं त्यक्त्वा ययौ कार्यवशाद् द्रुतम् ॥

kāmakrodhasamutthena bhrātuḥ kopāgninā vṛtaḥ
prabhañjana ivāprītaḥ prayayau lakṣmaṇas tadā
sālatālāśvakarṇāṃś ca tarasā pātayan bahūn
paryasyan girikūṭāni drumān anyāṃś ca vegataḥ
śilāś ca śakalīkurvan padbhyāṃ gaja ivāśugaḥ
dūram ekapadaṃ tyaktvā yayau kāryavaśād drutam

Translation

Ringed by his brother’s fire of anger,
born of longing and of wrath,
like a storm wind, in displeasure,
Lakshmana went forth then,
felling by his force sal and palm
and ashvakarna trees in numbers,
hurling aside the hilltops
and other trees in his speed,
splintering rocks beneath his feet
like a swift-moving elephant;
far he went at every stride,
and swiftly, his task driving him.

Subtitle

Ringed by his brother's fire of anger,
he went like a storm wind,
felling sal and palm,
crushing rocks underfoot like an elephant.

॥ 4.31.16–19 ॥

CrEd 4.30.16–19

वाल्मीकिValmikiverse caption

वाल्मीकि

ताम् अपश्यद् बलाकीर्णां हरिराजमहापुरीम् ।
दुर्गाम् इक्ष्वाकुशार्दूलः किष्किन्धां गिरिसंकटे ।
रोषात् प्रस्फुरमाणौष्ठः सुग्रीवं प्रति लक्ष्मणः ।
ददर्श वानरान् भीमान् किष्किन्धाया बहिश्चरान् ।
शैलशृङ्गाणि शतशः प्रवृद्धांश् च महीरुहान् ।
जगृहुः कुञ्जरप्रख्या वानराः पर्वतान्तरे ।
तान् गृहीतप्रहरणान् हरीन् दृष्ट्वा तु लक्ष्मणः ।
बभूव द्विगुणं क्रुद्धो बह्विन्धन इवानलः ॥

tām apaśyad balākīrṇāṃ harirājamahāpurīm
durgām ikṣvākuśārdūlaḥ kiṣkindhāṃ girisaṃkaṭe
roṣāt prasphuramāṇauṣṭhaḥ sugrīvaṃ prati lakṣmaṇaḥ
dadarśa vānarān bhīmān kiṣkindhāyā bahiścarān
śailaśṛṅgāṇi śataśaḥ pravṛddhāṃś ca mahīruhān
jagṛhuḥ kuñjaraprakhyā vānarāḥ parvatāntare
tān gṛhītapraharaṇān harīn dṛṣṭvā tu lakṣmaṇaḥ
babhūva dviguṇaṃ kruddho bahvindhana ivānalaḥ

Translation

He saw it, thronged with troops,
the monkey king’s great city,
the Ikshvaku tiger saw it, hard to reach,
Kishkindha in its mountain gorge.
His lips trembling with rage at Sugriva,
Lakshmana beheld
the fearsome monkeys
who ranged outside Kishkindha.
Mountain peaks by the hundred
and towering trees
the monkeys seized, like elephants,
in the hollows of the hills.
Seeing those monkeys, weapons seized,
Lakshmana then
grew twice as wrathful,
like a fire heaped with fuel.

Subtitle

Seeing the monkeys arm themselves
with hilltops and trees,
Lakshmana blazed twice over,
like a fire fed much fuel.

॥ 4.31.32–33 ॥

CrEd 4.30.32–33

लक्ष्मणLakshmana

वाल्मीकि

सुग्रीवः कथ्यतां वत्स ममागमनम् इत्य् उत एष रामानुजः प्राप्तस् त्वत्सकाशम् अरिंदमः भ्रातुर् व्यसनसंतप्तो द्वारि तिष्ठति लक्ष्मणः ॥

sugrīvaḥ kathyatāṃ vatsa mamāgamanam ity uta eṣa rāmānujaḥ prāptas tvatsakāśam ariṃdamaḥ bhrātur vyasanasaṃtapto dvāri tiṣṭhati lakṣmaṇaḥ

Translation

Let Sugriva be told, child,
that I have come, in these words:
“Here is Rama’s younger brother, come
before you, tamer of foes;
burning with his brother’s sorrow,
Lakshmana stands at the gate.”

लीला

वत्स, सुग्रीव से कहो कि मैं आया हूँ। कहना: राम का छोटा भाई लक्ष्मण, भाई के दुःख में जलता हुआ, द्वार पर खड़ा है।

Subtitle

Child, tell Sugriva I have come.
Say: Rama's brother,
burning with his brother's grief,
stands at the gate.

॥ 4.31.35 ॥

CrEd 4.30.34

अंगदAngada

वाल्मीकि

सौमित्रिर् अयम् आगतः ॥

saumitrir ayam āgataḥ

Translation

Saumitri is here, he has come.

लीला

सौमित्र आए हैं।

Subtitle

Saumitri
has come.

॥ 4.31.22, 40–41 ॥

CrEd 4.30.22, 35–36

silent moment मौन क्षण

॥ 4.31.46 ॥

CrEd 4.30.41

silent moment मौन क्षण

Part 2 · भाग 2

A friend is easy to make

Valmiki 4.32.1–22; 4.33.1–24, 63–66 (CrEd 4.31.1–4.32.27)

॥ 4.32.1–2 ॥

CrEd 4.31.1–2

silent moment मौन क्षण

॥ 4.32.3 ॥

CrEd 4.31.3

सुग्रीवSugriva

वाल्मीकि

न मे दुर्व्याहृतं किं चिन् नापि मे दुरनुष्ठितम् लक्ष्मणो राघवभ्राता क्रुद्धः किम् इति चिन्तये ॥

na me durvyāhṛtaṃ kiṃ cin nāpi me duranuṣṭhitam lakṣmaṇo rāghavabhrātā kruddhaḥ kim iti cintaye

Translation

Nothing ill have I spoken,
nothing ill have I done;
why is Lakshmana, Raghava’s brother,
angry? So I wonder.

लीला

न मैंने कुछ ग़लत कहा, न कुछ ग़लत किया। फिर राघव के भाई लक्ष्मण नाराज़ क्यों हैं? यही सोच रहा हूँ।

Subtitle

I said nothing wrong,
did nothing wrong.
Why is Raghava's brother angry?
I keep wondering.

॥ 4.32.4, 6ab ॥

CrEd 4.31.4, 6ab

condensed from 4.32.4, 6ab

सुग्रीवSugriva

वाल्मीकि

असुहृद्भिर् ममामित्रैर् नित्यम् अन्तरदर्शिभिः मम दोषान् असंभूताञ् श्रावितो राघवानुजः … न खल्व् अस्ति मम त्रासो लक्ष्मणान् नापि राघवात् ॥

asuhṛdbhir mamāmitrair nityam antaradarśibhiḥ mama doṣān asaṃbhūtāñ śrāvito rāghavānujaḥ … na khalv asti mama trāso lakṣmaṇān nāpi rāghavāt

Translation

Ill-wishers, enemies of mine,
ever watching for a gap,
have told of faults I never had
to Raghava’s younger brother …
I have no fear, none,
of Lakshmana, nor of Raghava.

लीला

मेरे बैरी, जो हमेशा कोई छेद ढूँढ़ते रहते हैं, उन्होंने उसे मेरे ऐसे दोष सुनाए हैं जो मुझमें हैं ही नहीं। मुझे न लक्ष्मण से डर है, न राघव से।

Subtitle

My enemies, always hunting a gap,
have told him faults I never had.
I fear neither Lakshmana
nor Raghava.

॥ 4.32.6cd–7 ॥

CrEd 4.31.6cd–7

सुग्रीवSugriva

वाल्मीकि

मित्रं त्व् अस्थानकुपितं जनयत्य् एव संभ्रमम् सर्वथा सुकरं मित्रं दुष्करं परिपालनम् अनित्यत्वात् तु चित्तानां प्रीतिर् अल्पेऽपि भिद्यते ॥

mitraṃ tv asthānakupitaṃ janayaty eva saṃbhramam sarvathā sukaraṃ mitraṃ duṣkaraṃ paripālanam anityatvāt tu cittānāṃ prītir alpe 'pi bhidyate

Translation

But a friend angered without cause
stirs alarm indeed.
A friend is easy to make, always;
hard is the keeping.
For hearts do not stay constant,
and love breaks over a little.

लीला

पर बेवजह रूठा दोस्त बेचैन कर देता है। दोस्त बनाना आसान है, निभाना मुश्किल। मन बदलते देर नहीं लगती; ज़रा-सी बात पर प्रीत टूट जाती है।

Subtitle

A friend angered without cause alarms.
A friend is easy to make,
hard to keep.
Hearts change; love breaks over a little.

॥ 4.32.8 ॥

CrEd 4.31.8

सुग्रीवSugriva

वाल्मीकि

अतोनिमित्तं त्रस्तोऽहं रामेण तु महात्मना यन् ममोपकृतं शक्यं प्रतिकर्तुं न तन् मया ॥

atonimittaṃ trasto 'haṃ rāmeṇa tu mahātmanā yan mamopakṛtaṃ śakyaṃ pratikartuṃ na tan mayā

Translation

For this cause am I afraid:
by Rama, the great-souled,
the good that was done me
I have no power to repay.

लीला

इसीलिए डरता हूँ। महात्मा राम ने मेरे लिए जो किया, उसका बदला मैं कभी नहीं चुका सकता।

Subtitle

That is why I am afraid:
what great Rama did for me
I can never repay.

॥ 4.32.9 ॥

CrEd 4.31.9

silent moment मौन क्षण

॥ 4.32.10–11 ॥

CrEd 4.31.10–11

हनुमानHanuman

वाल्मीकि

सर्वथा नैतद् आश्चर्यं यत् त्वं हरिगणेश्वर न विस्मरसि सुस्निग्धम् उपकारकृतं शुभम् राघवेण तु शूरेण भयम् उत्सृज्य दूरतः त्वत्प्रियार्थं हतो वाली शक्रतुल्यपराक्रमः ॥

sarvathā naitad āścaryaṃ yat tvaṃ harigaṇeśvara na vismarasi susnigdham upakārakṛtaṃ śubham rāghaveṇa tu śūreṇa bhayam utsṛjya dūrataḥ tvatpriyārthaṃ hato vālī śakratulyaparākramaḥ

Translation

It is no wonder, none,
lord of the monkey hosts,
that you do not forget
a kindness so loving and fair.
For Raghava the brave,
casting fear far from him,
slew Vali for your sake,
Vali, in valour Shakra’s equal.

लीला

अचरज नहीं, हरिराज, कि आप इतने स्नेह-भरे उपकार को नहीं भूलते। आपकी ख़ातिर वीर राघव ने डर को दूर फेंककर इंद्र-जैसे पराक्रमी वाली को मारा।

Subtitle

No wonder you don't forget
so loving a kindness.
For you, Raghava cast fear aside
and killed Vali, Indra's equal.

॥ 4.32.12 ॥

CrEd 4.31.12

हनुमानHanuman

वाल्मीकि

सर्वथा प्रणयात् क्रुद्धो राघवो नात्र संशयः भ्रातरं स प्रहितवांल् लक्ष्मणं लक्ष्मिवर्धनम् ॥

sarvathā praṇayāt kruddho rāghavo nātra saṃśayaḥ bhrātaraṃ sa prahitavāṃl lakṣmaṇaṃ lakṣmivardhanam

Translation

Surely Raghava’s anger is from love;
of this there is no doubt.
He has sent his brother,
Lakshmana, who swells good fortune.

लीला

राघव प्रेम के कारण नाराज़ हैं, इसमें कोई शक नहीं। इसीलिए उन्होंने अपने भाई लक्ष्मण को भेजा है।

Subtitle

Raghava is angry out of love;
of that there is no doubt.
So he has sent
his brother Lakshmana.

॥ 4.32.13–14 ॥

CrEd 4.31.13–14

हनुमानHanuman

वाल्मीकि

त्वं प्रमत्तो न जानीषे कालं कलविदां वर फुल्लसप्तच्छदश्यामा प्रवृत्ता तु शरच् छिवा निर्मलग्रहनक्षत्रा द्यौः प्रनष्टबलाहका प्रसन्नाश् च दिशः सर्वाः सरितश् च सरांसि च ॥

tvaṃ pramatto na jānīṣe kālaṃ kalavidāṃ vara phullasaptacchadaśyāmā pravṛttā tu śarac chivā nirmalagrahanakṣatrā dyauḥ pranaṣṭabalāhakā prasannāś ca diśaḥ sarvāḥ saritaś ca sarāṃsi ca

Translation

Heedless, you do not know the time,
best of those who measure time.
Dark with the flowering saptacchada,
the gracious autumn has begun.
Clear are the planets and the stars,
the sky, its clouds all gone;
and bright are all the quarters,
the rivers and the lakes.

लीला

आप बेसुध रहे; समय पहचानने वालों में श्रेष्ठ होकर भी समय नहीं पहचाना। शरद आ गई है: आकाश में बादल नहीं, ग्रह-तारे निर्मल, नदियाँ साफ़।

Subtitle

Careless, you missed the time,
you who know time best.
Autumn is here: clouds gone,
the stars bright, the rivers clear.

॥ 4.32.17 ॥

CrEd 4.31.17

हनुमानHanuman

वाल्मीकि

कृतापराधस्य हि ते नान्यत् पश्याम्य् अहं क्षमम् अन्तरेणाञ्जलिं बद्ध्वा लक्ष्मणस्य प्रसादनात् ॥

kṛtāparādhasya hi te nānyat paśyāmy ahaṃ kṣamam antareṇāñjaliṃ baddhvā lakṣmaṇasya prasādanāt

Translation

For you, who have done the wrong,
I see no other fitting course
than to join your palms
and win Lakshmana’s grace.

लीला

भूल आपकी है। मुझे इसके सिवा कोई रास्ता नहीं दिखता: हाथ जोड़िए, और लक्ष्मण को मना लीजिए।

Subtitle

The fault is yours.
I see no way but this:
join your palms,
and win Lakshmana's grace.

॥ 4.33.1–3 ॥

CrEd 4.32.1–3

silent moment मौन क्षण

॥ 4.33.4, 7–8 ॥

CrEd 4.32.4, 7–8

वाल्मीकिValmikiverse caption

वाल्मीकि

स तं रत्नमयीं श्रीमान् दिव्यां पुष्पितकाननाम् ।
रम्यां रत्नसमाकीर्णां ददर्श महतीं गुहाम् ।
चन्दनागरुपद्मानां गन्धैः सुरभिगन्धिनाम् ।
मैरेयाणां मधूनां च संमोदितमहापथाम् ।
विन्ध्यमेरुगिरिप्रस्थैः प्रासादैर् नैकभूमिभिः ।
ददर्श गिरिनद्यश् च विमलास् तत्र राघवः ॥

sa taṃ ratnamayīṃ śrīmān divyāṃ puṣpitakānanām
ramyāṃ ratnasamākīrṇāṃ dadarśa mahatīṃ guhām
candanāgarupadmānāṃ gandhaiḥ surabhigandhinām
maireyāṇāṃ madhūnāṃ ca saṃmoditamahāpathām
vindhyamerugiriprasthaiḥ prāsādair naikabhūmibhiḥ
dadarśa girinadyaś ca vimalās tatra rāghavaḥ

Translation

The glorious one beheld it, jewelled,
divine, its groves in flower,
lovely, strewn with gems,
the great cave …
its broad ways perfumed with the scents
of sandal, aloe, fragrant lotus,
of maireya wine
and of honey-wine;
with palaces of many storeys,
like the heights of Vindhya and Meru;
and there the Raghava beheld
clear streams from the hills.

Subtitle

He saw the great cave, jewelled,
its groves in flower,
its streets sweet with sandal and wine,
its mountain streams clear.

॥ 4.33.19–24 ॥

CrEd 4.32.19–24

silent moment मौन क्षण

॥ 4.33.63–66 ॥

CrEd 4.32.25–27

वाल्मीकिValmikiverse caption

वाल्मीकि

ततः सुग्रीवम् आसीनं काञ्चने परमासने ।
महार्हास्तरणोपेते ददर्शादित्यसंनिभम् ।
दिव्याभरणचित्राङ्गं दिव्यरूपं यशस्विनम् ।
दिव्यमाल्याम्बरधरं महेन्द्रम् इव दुर्जयम् ।
दिव्याभरणमाल्याभिः प्रमदाभिः समावृतम् ।
रुमां तु वीरः परिरभ्य गाढं वरासनस्थो वरहेमवर्णः ।
ददर्श सौमित्रिम् अदीनसत्त्वं विशालनेत्रः सुविशालनेत्रम् ॥

tataḥ sugrīvam āsīnaṃ kāñcane paramāsane
mahārhāstaraṇopete dadarśādityasaṃnibham
divyābharaṇacitrāṅgaṃ divyarūpaṃ yaśasvinam
divyamālyāmbaradharaṃ mahendram iva durjayam
divyābharaṇamālyābhiḥ pramadābhiḥ samāvṛtam
rumāṃ tu vīraḥ parirabhya gāḍhaṃ varāsanastho varahemavarṇaḥ
dadarśa saumitrim adīnasattvaṃ viśālanetraḥ suviśālanetram

Translation

Then he saw Sugriva, seated
on a golden throne, the highest,
spread with costly coverings,
like the very sun;
his limbs bright with divine adornments,
divine in form, renowned,
in divine garlands and garments,
unconquerable as great Indra,
ringed by young women
in divine adornments and garlands.
Holding Ruma close, the hero,
throned, the hue of finest gold,
saw Saumitri, of undaunted spirit:
wide-eyed, he saw the wider-eyed.

Subtitle

He saw Sugriva, gold as the sun,
on a golden throne, holding Ruma close;
and the wide-eyed king
saw wide-eyed Saumitri.

Part 3 · भाग 3

The first fear

Valmiki 4.34.1–19; 4.35.1–23; 4.36.1–20 (CrEd 4.33.1–4.35.20)

॥ 4.34.1–5 ॥

CrEd 4.33.1–5

silent moment मौन क्षण

॥ 4.34.8 ॥

CrEd 4.33.8

लक्ष्मणLakshmana

वाल्मीकि

यस् तु राजा स्थितोऽधर्मे मित्राणाम् उपकारिणाम् मिथ्याप्रतिज्ञां कुरुते को नृशंसतरस् ततः ॥

yas tu rājā sthito 'dharme mitrāṇām upakāriṇām mithyāpratijñāṃ kurute ko nṛśaṃsataras tataḥ

Translation

But the king who, set in unrighteousness,
to friends who have done him good
makes a promise false:
who is crueller than he?

लीला

जो राजा अधर्म पर टिककर, उपकार करने वाले मित्रों से झूठा वादा करे, उससे बढ़कर निर्दयी कौन?

Subtitle

A king who stands in wrong,
and breaks his word to friends who helped him:
who is crueller
than he?

॥ 4.34.12 ॥

CrEd 4.33.12

लक्ष्मणLakshmana

वाल्मीकि

ब्रह्मघ्ने च सुरापे च चोरे भग्नव्रते तथा निष्कृतिर् विहिता सद्भिः कृतघ्ने नास्ति निष्कृतिः ॥

brahmaghne ca surāpe ca core bhagnavrate tathā niṣkṛtir vihitā sadbhiḥ kṛtaghne nāsti niṣkṛtiḥ

Translation

For the slayer of a Brahmin, for the drinker,
for the thief, the breaker of vows,
the good have ordained atonement;
for the ungrateful there is none.

लीला

ब्राह्मण का हत्यारा हो, शराबी हो, चोर हो, व्रत तोड़ने वाला हो, सज्जनों ने सबका प्रायश्चित बताया है। कृतघ्न का कोई प्रायश्चित नहीं।

Subtitle

For a Brahmin's killer, a drinker,
a thief, a breaker of vows,
there is atonement.
For the ungrateful, none.

॥ 4.34.13ab, 15 ॥

CrEd 4.33.13ab, 15

condensed from 4.34.13ab, 15

लक्ष्मणLakshmana

वाल्मीकि

अनार्यस् त्वं कृतघ्नश् च मिथ्यावादी च वानर … स त्वं ग्राम्येषु भोगेषु सक्तो मिथ्याप्रतिश्रवः न त्वां रामो विजानीते सर्पं मण्डूकराविणम् ॥

anāryas tvaṃ kṛtaghnaś ca mithyāvādī ca vānara … sa tvaṃ grāmyeṣu bhogeṣu sakto mithyāpratiśravaḥ na tvāṃ rāmo vijānīte sarpaṃ maṇḍūkarāviṇam

Translation

Ignoble you are, ungrateful,
a speaker of lies, monkey …
You, clinging to common pleasures,
your promise false:
Rama does not know you
for a snake that croaks like a frog.

लीला

तुम नीच हो, कृतघ्न हो, झूठे हो, वानर! राम तुम्हें पहचान नहीं पाए: तुम मेंढक की बोली बोलने वाले साँप हो।

Subtitle

Ignoble, ungrateful, a liar, monkey:
that is you. Rama never knew you
for a snake
that croaks like a frog.

॥ 4.34.18 ॥

CrEd 4.33.18

लक्ष्मणLakshmana

वाल्मीकि

न च संकुचितः पन्था येन वाली हतो गतः समये तिष्ठ सुग्रीव मा वालिपथम् अन्वगाः ॥

na ca saṃkucitaḥ panthā yena vālī hato gataḥ samaye tiṣṭha sugrīva mā vālipatham anvagāḥ

Translation

Nor has the path grown narrow
by which Vali went, slain.
Stand by the pact, Sugriva;
do not follow Vali’s path.

लीला

जिस रास्ते मरकर वाली गया, वह रास्ता अभी बंद नहीं हुआ। अपने वचन पर टिके रहो, सुग्रीव। वाली की राह मत पकड़ो।

Subtitle

The path that Vali took, slain,
is not closed.
Keep your pact, Sugriva:
do not follow Vali's path.

॥ 4.35.1 ॥

CrEd 4.34.1

वाल्मीकिValmikiverse caption

वाल्मीकि

तथा ब्रुवाणं सौमित्रिं प्रदीप्तम् इव तेजसा ।
अब्रवील् लक्ष्मणं तारा ताराधिपनिभानना ॥

tathā bruvāṇaṃ saumitriṃ pradīptam iva tejasā
abravīl lakṣmaṇaṃ tārā tārādhipanibhānanā

Translation

To Saumitri, speaking thus,
blazing as if with fire,
to Lakshmana spoke Tara,
her face like the lord of the stars.

Subtitle

To Saumitri, blazing as if with fire,
moon-faced Tara spoke.

॥ 4.35.2–3ab ॥

CrEd 4.34.2–3ab

ताराTara

वाल्मीकि

नैवं लक्ष्मण वक्तव्यो नायं परुषम् अर्हति हरीणाम् ईश्वरः श्रोतुं तव वक्त्राद् विशेषतः नैवाकृतज्ञः सुग्रीवो न शठो नापि दारुणः ॥

naivaṃ lakṣmaṇa vaktavyo nāyaṃ paruṣam arhati harīṇām īśvaraḥ śrotuṃ tava vaktrād viśeṣataḥ naivākṛtajñaḥ sugrīvo na śaṭho nāpi dāruṇaḥ

Translation

Not so should he be spoken to, Lakshmana;
he does not deserve harsh words,
this lord of the monkeys, to hear them,
from your lips least of all.
Sugriva is not ungrateful,
not crooked, nor yet cruel.

लीला

ऐसे नहीं, लक्ष्मण। वानरों के राजा कठोर बातों के योग्य नहीं, और आपके मुँह से तो बिल्कुल नहीं। सुग्रीव न कृतघ्न हैं, न कपटी, न निर्दयी।

Subtitle

Not so, Lakshmana.
He does not deserve harsh words,
least of all from you.
He is not ungrateful, not false, not cruel.

॥ 4.35.4ab, 6abc ॥

CrEd 4.34.4ab, 6abc

condensed from 4.35.4ab, 6abc

ताराTara

वाल्मीकि

उपकारं कृतं वीरो नाप्य् अयं विस्मृतः कपिः … सुदुःखं शायितः पूर्वं प्राप्येदं सुखम् उत्तमम् प्राप्तकालं न जानीते ॥

upakāraṃ kṛtaṃ vīro nāpy ayaṃ vismṛtaḥ kapiḥ … suduḥkhaṃ śāyitaḥ pūrvaṃ prāpyedaṃ sukham uttamam prāptakālaṃ na jānīte

Translation

Nor has this hero, this monkey,
forgotten the kindness done …
Long he lay in deep sorrow;
now, having found this highest joy,
he does not know the time has come,

लीला

उन्होंने वह उपकार भुलाया नहीं है। बहुत दिन दुःख में पड़े रहे; अब यह सुख मिला, तो समय आने की सुध न रही।

Subtitle

He has not forgotten the kindness.
He lay long in sorrow;
finding this joy,
he did not know the time had come.

॥ 4.35.6d–8 ॥

CrEd 4.34.6d–8

ताराTara

वाल्मीकि

विश्वामित्रो यथा मुनिः घृताच्यां किल संसक्तो दशवर्षाणि लक्ष्मण अहोऽमन्यत धर्मात्मा विश्वामित्रो महामुनिः स हि प्राप्तं न जानीते कालं कालविदां वरः विश्वामित्रो महातेजाः किं पुनर् यः पृथग्जनः ॥

viśvāmitro yathā muniḥ ghṛtācyāṃ kila saṃsakto daśavarṣāṇi lakṣmaṇa aho 'manyata dharmātmā viśvāmitro mahāmuniḥ sa hi prāptaṃ na jānīte kālaṃ kālavidāṃ varaḥ viśvāmitro mahātejāḥ kiṃ punar yaḥ pṛthagjanaḥ

Translation

as Vishvamitra did not, the sage.
Clinging to Ghritachi, they tell,
for ten years, Lakshmana,
he thought it but a day,
the righteous, the great sage Vishvamitra.
For he knew not the time had come,
he, best of those who know time,
Vishvamitra of great splendour;
how much less a common man?

लीला

घृताची में खोए महामुनि विश्वामित्र को दस बरस एक दिन जैसे लगे। जब उन्हें भी समय की सुध न रही, तो साधारण जन की क्या बात?

Subtitle

Lost in Ghritachi,
great Vishvamitra thought ten years a day.
If even he missed the time,
what of an ordinary one?

॥ 4.35.16–17ab, 18ab ॥

CrEd 4.34.16–17ab, 18ab

condensed from 4.35.16–17ab, 18ab

ताराTara

वाल्मीकि

अहत्वा तांश् च दुर्धर्षान् राक्षसान् कामरूपिणः न शक्यो रावणो हन्तुं येन सा मैथिली हृता ते न शक्या रणे हन्तुम् असहायेन लक्ष्मण … एवम् आख्यातवान् वाली स ह्य् अभिज्ञो हरीश्वरः ॥

ahatvā tāṃś ca durdharṣān rākṣasān kāmarūpiṇaḥ na śakyo rāvaṇo hantuṃ yena sā maithilī hṛtā te na śakyā raṇe hantum asahāyena lakṣmaṇa … evam ākhyātavān vālī sa hy abhijño harīśvaraḥ

Translation

Unless those rakshasas are slain,
hard to assail, changing form at will,
Ravana cannot be slain,
he by whom Maithili was taken.
Nor can they be slain in battle
by one without allies, Lakshmana …
So Vali told it,
for he knew, the monkeys’ lord.

लीला

जिस रावण ने मैथिली को हरा, उसके राक्षसों को मारे बिना उसे कोई नहीं मार सकता; और उन्हें अकेले कोई नहीं मार सकता। यह वाली ने बताया था। वे जानते थे।

Subtitle

Ravana, who took Maithili,
cannot die till his rakshasas do,
and no one alone can kill them.
So Vali told me. He knew.

॥ 4.35.19, 21cd, 22c ॥

CrEd 4.34.19, 21cd, 22c

condensed from 4.35.19, 21cd, 22c

ताराTara

वाल्मीकि

त्वत्सहायनिमित्तं वै प्रेषिता हरिपुंगवाः आनेतुं वानरान् युद्धे सुबहून् हरियूथपान् … अद्य तैर् वानरैः सर्वैर् आगन्तव्यं महाबलैः … जहि कोपम् अरिंदम ॥

tvatsahāyanimittaṃ vai preṣitā haripuṃgavāḥ ānetuṃ vānarān yuddhe subahūn hariyūthapān … adya tair vānaraiḥ sarvair āgantavyaṃ mahābalaiḥ … jahi kopam ariṃdama

Translation

For your help, indeed, were sent
the bulls among the monkeys,
to bring monkeys for the war, many,
leaders of monkey troops …
Today all those monkeys
must come, the mighty ones …
cast off your anger, tamer of foes.

लीला

आपकी सहायता के लिए वानर-सरदार सेनाएँ लाने गए हैं। आज ही वे सब आ पहुँचेंगे। गुस्सा छोड़ दीजिए।

Subtitle

For your help, the chiefs
have gone to bring the troops.
Today they all arrive.
Let your anger go.

॥ 4.35.23 ॥

CrEd 4.34.23

silent moment मौन क्षण

॥ 4.35.23 ॥

CrEd 4.34.23

ताराTara

वाल्मीकि

तव हि मुखम् इदं निरीक्ष्य कोपात् क्षतजनिभे नयने निरीक्षमाणाः हरिवरवनिता न यान्ति शान्तिं प्रथमभयस्य हि शङ्किताः स्म सर्वाः ॥

tava hi mukham idaṃ nirīkṣya kopāt kṣatajanibhe nayane nirīkṣamāṇāḥ harivaravanitā na yānti śāntiṃ prathamabhayasya hi śaṅkitāḥ sma sarvāḥ

Translation

For seeing this face of yours in anger,
looking on your eyes, red as blood,
the wives of the monkey lords find no peace;
we all dread the first fear.

लीला

गुस्से में आपका यह चेहरा देखकर, ख़ून-सी लाल आँखें देखकर, हम वानर-स्त्रियों को चैन नहीं। हम सबको फिर वही पहला डर सता रहा है।

Subtitle

Seeing your face in anger,
your eyes red as blood,
we women find no peace.
We all dread that first fear again.

॥ 4.36.1 ॥

CrEd 4.35.1

silent moment मौन क्षण

॥ 4.36.2–3 ॥

CrEd 4.35.2–3

वाल्मीकिValmikiverse caption

वाल्मीकि

तस्मिन् प्रतिगृहीते तु वाक्ये हरिगणेश्वरः ।
लक्ष्मणात् सुमहत् त्रासं वस्त्रं क्लिन्नम् इवात्यजत् ।
ततः कण्ठगतं माल्यं चित्रं बहुगुणं महत् ।
चिच्छेद विमदश् चासीत् सुग्रीवो वानरेश्वरः ॥

tasmin pratigṛhīte tu vākye harigaṇeśvaraḥ
lakṣmaṇāt sumahat trāsaṃ vastraṃ klinnam ivātyajat
tataḥ kaṇṭhagataṃ mālyaṃ citraṃ bahuguṇaṃ mahat
ciccheda vimadaś cāsīt sugrīvo vānareśvaraḥ

Translation

When those words had been accepted,
the lord of the monkey hosts
cast off his great fear of Lakshmana
like a garment drenched.
Then the garland at his throat,
bright, many-stranded, great,
he tore away, and was sober,
Sugriva, lord of the monkeys.

Subtitle

The monkey king cast off his fear
like a wet garment,
tore the garland from his throat,
and was sober.

॥ 4.36.5, 10 ॥

CrEd 4.35.5, 10

condensed from 4.36.5, 10

सुग्रीवSugriva

वाल्मीकि

प्रनष्टा श्रीश् च कीर्तिश् च कपिराज्यं च शाश्वतम् रामप्रसादात् सौमित्रे पुनः प्राप्तम् इदं मया … अनुयात्रां नरेन्द्रस्य करिष्येऽहं नरर्षभ गच्छतो रावणं हन्तुं वैरिणं सपुरःसरम् ॥

pranaṣṭā śrīś ca kīrtiś ca kapirājyaṃ ca śāśvatam rāmaprasādāt saumitre punaḥ prāptam idaṃ mayā … anuyātrāṃ narendrasya kariṣye 'haṃ nararṣabha gacchato rāvaṇaṃ hantuṃ vairiṇaṃ sapuraḥsaram

Translation

Fortune lost, and fame,
and the lasting monkey kingdom,
by Rama’s grace, Saumitri,
I have won all this again …
I will march in the train
of the lord of men, bull among men,
as he goes to slay Ravana,
his foe, and all his followers.

लीला

खोया वैभव, यश, वानरों का अटल राज, सब राम की कृपा से मुझे फिर मिला है, सौमित्र। जब वे रावण को मारने निकलेंगे, मैं उनके पीछे चलूँगा।

Subtitle

My fortune, my fame, my kingdom:
I have them back by Rama's grace.
When he marches on Ravana,
I march behind him.

॥ 4.36.11 ॥

CrEd 4.35.11

सुग्रीवSugriva

वाल्मीकि

यदि किं चिद् अतिक्रान्तं विश्वासात् प्रणयेन वा प्रेष्यस्य क्षमितव्यं मे न कश् चिन् नापराध्यति ॥

yadi kiṃ cid atikrāntaṃ viśvāsāt praṇayena vā preṣyasya kṣamitavyaṃ me na kaś cin nāparādhyati

Translation

If I have overstepped in anything,
from trust, or out of love,
let me, your servant, be forgiven;
there is none who never errs.

लीला

भरोसे में या प्रेम में अगर मुझसे कोई भूल हुई हो, तो अपने सेवक को माफ़ कीजिए। ऐसा कौन है, जिससे भूल न हो?

Subtitle

If I overstepped,
out of trust or out of love,
forgive your servant.
Who is there who never errs?

॥ 4.36.12–13, 15 ॥

CrEd 4.35.12–13, 15

condensed from 4.36.12–13, 15

लक्ष्मणLakshmana

वाल्मीकि

सर्वथा हि मम भ्राता सनाथो वानरेश्वर त्वया नाथेन सुग्रीव प्रश्रितेन विशेषतः … सहायेन च सुग्रीव त्वया रामः प्रतापवान् वधिष्यति रणे शत्रून् अचिरान् नात्र संशयः ॥

sarvathā hi mama bhrātā sanātho vānareśvara tvayā nāthena sugrīva praśritena viśeṣataḥ … sahāyena ca sugrīva tvayā rāmaḥ pratāpavān vadhiṣyati raṇe śatrūn acirān nātra saṃśayaḥ

Translation

For in every way my brother
has a protector, lord of monkeys,
in you, Sugriva, his protector,
and you so courteous above all …
With you for his ally, Sugriva,
Rama, the mighty,
will slay his foes in battle, and soon;
of this there is no doubt.

लीला

वानरराज सुग्रीव, तुम्हारे होते मेरे भाई सनाथ हैं। तुम्हारे साथ से राम जल्द ही अपने शत्रुओं को मार गिराएँगे।

Subtitle

With you, Sugriva,
my brother has a protector.
With you beside him,
Rama will soon slay his foes.

॥ 4.36.19–20 ॥

CrEd 4.35.19–20

लक्ष्मणLakshmana

वाल्मीकि

किं तु शीघ्रम् इतो वीर निष्क्राम त्वं मया सह सान्त्वयस्व वयस्यं च भार्याहरणदुःखितम् यच् च शोकाभिभूतस्य श्रुत्वा रामस्य भाषितम् मया त्वं परुषाण्य् उक्तस् तच् च त्वं क्षन्तुम् अर्हसि ॥

kiṃ tu śīghram ito vīra niṣkrāma tvaṃ mayā saha sāntvayasva vayasyaṃ ca bhāryāharaṇaduḥkhitam yac ca śokābhibhūtasya śrutvā rāmasya bhāṣitam mayā tvaṃ paruṣāṇy uktas tac ca tvaṃ kṣantum arhasi

Translation

But quickly, hero, go out from here,
go out with me,
and comfort your friend,
grieving for his wife, carried off.
And what, hearing the words of Rama,
overwhelmed by grief,
I said to you in harshness,
that too you should forgive.

लीला

अब जल्दी मेरे साथ चलो, और अपने मित्र को ढाढ़स बँधाओ; पत्नी के छिनने से दुःखी हैं। और राम का दुःख सुनकर मैंने जो कड़वी बातें कहीं, उन्हें क्षमा करना।

Subtitle

Come with me now;
comfort your friend, robbed of his wife.
And forgive the harsh words I spoke,
hearing Rama's grief.

॥ 4.36.19 ॥

CrEd 4.35.19

silent moment मौन क्षण